This is my first try at a serious short story. Actually, I don't know
whether it qualifies as a short story, but it is a short piece of
fiction. None of the characters is anybody I know or know of, and the
events aren't real in my life or anyone's that I 'm aware of. Of
course, although the people and events aren't real, they are possible.
They unfolded from my imagination.
My imagination is not
fanciful. That is to say, there are no spaceships, no aliens, no
vampires or not even oddball characters. The story is, in this case,
just mundane. I still think it qualifies as a story, however.
I realized It wasn't going to be interesting just because I threw in
some aliens or such, so I kept the events something I could handle and I
was merely glad to be able to get some actual dialogue between
characters. This tactic, kept me from getting disappointed and quitting
because I had inadvertently gotten in over my head.
I may
not write another short story, but if I don't it won't be because I got
depressed and upset trying to write this one. This one involved some
work, some changes, some rewrites, but nothing which was too
nerve-wracking. Had I tried aliens or vampires or whatever, I'm certain
I would have given up. For example , the only alien name I might have
come up with might have been Zorzon 3 or Pluton or Xertex. Not very
original space names. Some people may have done better trying aliens and
vampires rather than ordinary characters. Maybe , they would have been
bored crazy with names like Bill or Joe, or Ted. Anyway, This is my
story, the good and the bad. I'll let other writers worry about their
stories, the good and the bad. So, here it is.
PH looked up and saw a young man running towards
him, tie and sportcoat flailing with the wind. The air was warm, with
some fair-weather clouds. To the left, the field was flat, leading to a
neighbors farm. The neighbors house was not really the centerpiece of
their property, the farm fields of cornstalks, or rather, short, frayed,
harvested cornstalks were the centerpiece. These cornstalks continued
through PH's property, but without actually being part of the neighbors
stalks. They continued to the right, eventually passing up and over a
small hill. Beyond this field, in the distance, stretching from the
left of the landscape to the right and continuing over the same small
hill was a roadway. The road accompanied by telephone polls and wires
had infrequent traffic. On this day PH would have seen none , if he'd
cared to notice.
PH was rotund, as many middle-aged farmers, but it wasn't an
unhealthy figure,. Healthy living, from exercise, to proper food stuffs
and moderation in all, were broadcast in ads and information, but
they, typically, were not much motivation for PH to change. The things
he would have had to give up were not worth the change. The old sayings
about farmers and their family meals were pretty much true; and
low-fat, low-sodium, low in cholesterol, etc. meals were not the main
course. If it had been 40 years ago he'd have been
riding a harvester instead of walking the field. Certainly, this
lifestyle wasn't an unhealthy one as a lot of people seemed to be
convinced it was.
Phil had seen PH from the road, and seeing him
as his first, if not best, chance for help, started across the field. A
field of recently harvested corn stalk remains. It was a field he
wasn't unfamiliar with, having grown up in a community of farms. But it
seemed like it had been awhile since he'd been this close to one.
When younger, he rarely ran across a farm field. Either, he was
working it or, by way of farm discipline, was stuck to home and it's
living space. But this was his car that had broken down and it was a
remote area, he figured PH might be able to help.
"Hello" said Phil, braking his run as he approached. "It's a beautiful day."
"Yes, it is." PH replied. "What can I do ya for?" he asked.
"My car broke down. About . . . not far, maybe 1/2 a mile from here.
On the highway. Can you help me?" he paused. " I think it's just a
water hose leaking." Phil deplored bothering people and for this reason
he felt that what had seemed like his 'best chance' was , at the moment,
an intrusion which the farmer could justly ignore, thus leaving Phil
stuck and starting over again to find help.
PH looked at
Phil, Phil looked away for a moment and PH interrupted. "Come with me.
I've got some tools , we can probably fix it, if that's all it is."
Phil felt instantly more at ease.
"Where you from? asked PH of Phil, as they continued.
"Strathorn"." replied Phil.
"That's a ways."
"Yea, I was going to work."
"What kind of work ?"
"Salesman."
They went only a little farther before passing under a wooden framed
door entrance. PH walked to the left, grabbed a tool box and returned.
"We can take my car to get to yours." said PH.
"Great." replied Phil.
It was a sunny day made sunnier upon leaving the darkened barn. Phil
began to relax, his doubts about getting out of this jam, easing.
They slid into the car's front bench seats and drove off.
As PH braked his car behind that of Phil's, it began to rain. Starting
slowly, but quickly becoming a down pour. Both men, staring out of the
car window, determined that it was probably a summer shower and would
end soon. They waited. At times the rain washed the windshield as wave
upon wave flowed over the window. Shortly, the downpour stopped and
the sun appeared, leaving a steaming, wet road.
They exited the
car and as the two approached Phil's car PH said, "This car is old. I
won't be able to replace any parts. Hopefully, we can jimmy something to
get you going again."
" Fine." said Phil, and quickly added, " Thanks for your help."
PH continued his inspection. He found a hose cut from which radiator fluid had leaked.
"I can temporarily plug the leak and you should be all set."
"Great." replied Phil, "Can I help?"
"Naw, I think I can get it." said PH.
PH finished in about fifteen minutes. He realized he'd forgotten to
bring water with which to refill the radiator and after telling Phil of
his intentions, he left to get some and returned shortly. The system
was refilled and Phil was ready to go.
"You should be all set." said PH
"Thanks, thank you very much, I really appreciate it." said a beaming Phil.
Phil was happily relieved.
"Your welcome." replied PH. " Have a good ride from here and good
luck. It was nice meeting you." PH got into his car and began backing
toward home and his driveway.
For a moment, Phil kept a watchful eye over PH, as if this act of stewarding would protect PH.
Later, Phil thought about how absent-minded he'd been in not offering PH 5 or 10 dollars as thanks for his help.